"Joyas Voladoras", by Brian Doyle I
noticed that his writing style is based off of what he’s writing about at the
moment. He wants the reader to acknowledge what he’s feeling. Brian Doyle creates
an image with his words, also he makes sure that every word he uses is very crucial
to the story. He uses a lot of adjectives which makes it very wordy. When I reach
the final paragraph he is transitioning from animals to humans, he makes the
pace equal to the pace of a human heart beat. Then he uses real sayings that
connect with a human beings heart and or mind to have you truly think about these
occurrences in your lifetime. With the mammals and birds he gives a bunch of
background information and how their hearts work. When he transitions to the
human heart he doesn’t give much background, he just goes straight to the
feelings we can receive as humans from the heart.
In the
concluding paragraph I would explain the specific details that the author introduced
in the end to support the statement about the human heart. I would basically
tell them to think about something that had an effect on their heart like the line
that says “a cat with a broken spine dragging itself into the forest to die” he
wanted this ending paragraph to be the most simplest. Something that was easy
to relate to for the human reader because we all of a story, and or emotion to
something that we have experienced. This I feel is the best way to get through
to your reader by giving examples of things that are being experienced by
someone every day.
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